Monday, 25 April 2022
PEEFACE
Thursday, 24 March 2022
“How To Run a City Like Amazon and Other Fables” (2019)
‘Should cities be run like businesses?’ ask Graham, Kitchin, Mattern and Shaw. ‘Should city services and infrastructure be run by businesses?’ To explore these questions they have gathered 38 thinkers and writers to imagine cities run under various different business models: Amazon, Apple, IKEA, Pornhub, Spotify, Tinder, Uber, and so on. Some of these chapters are essays; most are short stories, fictional extrapolations — science fiction, no less. Most are thought-provoking and engaging, even if 38 stories is too many, and at 350-pages the book lacks somewhat of sprightliness.
In their introduction the editors note that ‘Let’s Run Our Cities Like Amazon!’ is a real-world position advanced by real-world people:
In an article to promote their new book — ‘A New City O/S’ — Stephen Goldsmith (a former Mayor of Indianapolis and Deputy Mayor of New York) and Neil Kleiman (Director of the NYU/Wagner Innovation Labs) contend that cities should act more like Amazon to better serve their citizens. They argue that cities will be more efficient and productive if they become data-driven, using analytics and machine learning to parse data about citizens and city services/ infrastructure into insights that provide a responsive, tailored experience.Many people, the editors point out, find such an idea concerning: ‘concerns about profit being placed before people and the environment, widening inequalities between citizens, a loss of rights, and the erosion of democracy, fairness, justice and accountability, the privatisation of public assets and corporatization of surveillance.’ It’s certainly true that the stories in this collection overwhelmingly skew in this direction.
In Andrew Iliadis’s ‘The Semantic City’, citizens have an actual Siri implanted in their brains. Sophia Maalsen and Kurt Iveson’s ‘Welcome to Jobstown’ imagines city run by Apple, or more precisely their fiction maps corporate demographics onto a shiny imagined urban space
The Jobstown local government launches significant updates, new services and new generation products in arena-style events; iPhone Video recordings of these events show an audience of young designers and tech-heads dressed in black polo necks, cheering on their Apple-determined future. These videos, immediately uploaded to social media accounts, reveal an interesting trend — the majority of Jobstown residents are white men. A demographic analysis shows that Jobstown is comprised of 70 per cent men compared to 30 percent women, and 55 per cent of residents are white.A lot of the work here manifests a scholarly caution that shades, sometimes, into a deadening shore-hugging. Matthew Zook’s ‘Cryps, Chains and Cranks’ imagines a city run on the principles of Bitcoin, and begins: ‘The sky above the city was the colour of encryption, tuned to an old hash solution, three blocks back in the chain’, which is quite a nice opener — except that Zook adds a footnote, ‘borrowed from William Gibson’s (1984) novel Neuromancer’, which underestimates his readership. If Jobstown is a cultish pseudo-utopia, Bitcointown is a comical disaster.
Back in 2020 a bunch of Bitcoin billionaires bought up four downtown blocks to make a model of a fully self-executing blockchain neighbourhood via a series of smart contracts and Dapps within a larger a Decentralized Autonomous Organization (DAO). Some bad coding in a couple obscure smart contracts — one for tracking waste output from toilets and another polling music preferences — got stuck in a loop and since then every 47.31 minutes the septic systems discharged into the streets and speakers in the district played an indie folk interpretation of Bohemian Rhapsody.Alison Powell’s ‘Registering Eve’ is based on a different blockchain, Etherium. Anthony Vanky’s ‘The Most Magical Place on Earth’ imagines a Disney-run city, and is, unfortunately therefore, a story that includes such phrases as ‘tee-hee-hee’ and ‘bibbidi-bobbidi-boo!’ In Manuel B Alber’s ‘Easycity’, Easyjet runs a city: in such a place a basic house is ridiculously cheap, but literally everything else is very costly. You start to see, I’m sure, the underlying principles by which these stories have been confected. And so the collection goes on: Matthew Claudel’s city is based on the business model of notorious academic publisher Elsevier (‘The Civic Method’): that is to say, the city is flashy but restrictive and exorbitant. Gavin Brown imagines a ‘Grindr City’, divided into tribes (‘Bear, Clean-cut, Daddy, Discreet, Geek, Jock, Leather, Otter, Poz, Rugged, Trans or Twink’). The city in Dietmar Offenhuber’s ‘Premium Places’ is run according to the logic of Pornhub (he thinks it would ‘in several ways like Facebook’, only with more sex).
Google gets several goes: in Leighton Evans’s ‘Seeing the City Through Google’s Eyes’ everyone is wearing Google-made ‘ARLens’ spectacles, which enables Google to control what they see. Tooran Alizadeh’s ‘There Is No Such Thing As Free Infrastructure’ tackles Google Fiber. Ayona Datta’s WhatsApp story, ‘A City of People, for the People, by the People’ imagines a city in which justice is rough and ground-up: if somebody shares video of you having sex on WhatsApp, you don’t go to the authorities; you share a more click-y story that shames your enemy, or distract the populace with some other online bait.
One of the best stories here, Pip Thornton’s witty ‘Subprime, Language and the Crash’, concerns a city in which Google has monetized the very words people speak (‘People know that if they use certain words, they get more data and cheaper Wifi bills, and this changes in different areas, so if you talk about how wonderful Google is here in the Bay area, you end up with loads of money. And if you talk about rival products in a building sponsored by a particular advertiser, you get less data at a higher price’). It leads to disaster, when words as such become ‘subprime’ and the market collapses.
But most of these 38 stories are pretty samey. The prose is generally grey, the characters mouthpieces for their author’s ideas, the satire — when the stories are satirical — tends to the clomp-clomp. Many authors take a tech company or product and imagine a city saturated with that tech rather than governed by that tech — but perhaps I’m nitpicking. There are certainly lots of interesting things in here, and since Meatspace give you the option of setting your own price when you download the PDF, you can certainly afford it. I recommend it, too.
Facebook, Google, Apple and Disney are huge corporations, no question, and they make obscene amounts of money. But none of them have taken over the business of actual governance. On the contrary, the nation state is as strong as it’s ever been (arguably, with Brexit and the election in so many territories of aggressively tribalist-nationalist quasi-fascist leaders, nationalism is stronger than it’s been for a while). Indeed, it seems to me a moot question whether Google, Facebook and Apple are huger, as corporations, than were (say) the Ford Motor Company or BP a century ago. We forget: not only did Ford generate eye-popping profits throughout the 1920s, he even bought up a five-thousand-square-mile chunk of Brazil in order to establish his own Fordlândia quasi-country, with a view to ensuring a steady supply of rubber for his US factories. That came to nothing, of course. But actually that coming-to-nothingness is my point. Big corporations have always pursued the best ways of maximising their profits. That’s what they do. It transpires taking over the business of national and international governance is not one such. Which, if you think about it for thirty seconds, makes sense, actually. Running a country is not profitable. Profit is maximised by identifying one aspect of life and mining it as deep as you can. Running a city is not about one aspect, but an interlocking series of many aspects, and the most effective way to orchestrate such a thing is via not profit but ideology. I’m not suggesting Corporations are ideologically neutral entities, of course. But I am suggesting that whilst the various individuals who make up corporations, from senior management down, are each congeries of ideological framing and signification, the corporation as such is determined by a very narrow ideology — make $$$. Maximise profit. Shareholder value, all these euphemism for the abduction of money. Money exists ‘in’ society (and cannot exist outwith society) so it is logical that the most efficient strategies for getting are version of niche identification and extraction. It’s a hostage to fortune, but I don’t believe we’ll see a real-life Neuromancer-style social future in which Google or Rotten Tomatoes or whoever are running everything. Nation-states are loss leaders, necessary frames that enable corporations to make mucho-mucho money.
This is not really a criticism of How To Run a City Like Amazon and Other Fables — these are thought-experiments, satires and exercises in ludic conceptualising, not prophesy, and Feyerabandian principles quite properly govern such things. But a little more variety of approach would have leavened the lump, and such thoughts are one such variant.
Monday, 21 February 2022
Poem: Heroic Quatrains
In his martial rage, the high point and essence of his existence, is like a lion, a wild boar, a storm, a river in a flood, a raging forest fire, a bright star from a dark cloud; his armour blazes like the sun, his eyes flash fire, his breast is filled with irresistible fury, his limbs are light and active. He mows down opponents like a reaper in a cornfield, like a wind scattering the foam of the sea, like a great dolphin swallowing little fishes … When a hero dies, dark night covers him, he is seized by hateful darkness; he is robbed of his sweet life, his soul rushes forth from the wound; it goes down to Hades bewailing its fate, leaving behind its youth and strength. The doom of death covers his eyes and nostrils, he breathes out his life in the dust, hateful fate swallows him up, he gluts the god of war with his blood. [Jasper Griffin, Homer on Life and Death (Clarendon: 1980), 90]
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A lion in his martial rage
a boar, a river running loud,
a storm, a raging forest blaze,
a white star in a blood-dark cloud:
his armour blazes like the sun,
his eyes flash fire, his breast is filled
with irresistible fury and
his limbs are active. He has killed.
You’re covered by the night, you’re seized
by hateful darkness, you are rushed
below, you loose your limbs and knees
your gaping mouth bites only dust
down to hades fate-bewailing
leaving youth and strength behind
lightless eyes eyes cloud inveiling
as blind as death as dead is blind
you glut the god of war with blood
your blood your blood yours in his maw
your strength ebbs outward as a flood
for this is war is war is war
Sunday, 6 February 2022
Frederik Pohl and Thomas T Thomas, "Mars Plus" (1994)
Frederik Pohl’s Man Plus (1976) is a minor classic of hard SF: set in the then-near future of the 1990s, it’s about the colonisation of Mars, but proposes that instead of terraforming the planet to make it hospitable to us, we should adapt and cyborgize our human bodies to make them fit for Mars as it is. The protagonist Roger Torraway is an astronaut slowly modified over the course of the story into a transhuman cyborg who can gambol happily through the extreme cold and near vacuum (1% of Earth’s atmospheric pressure) of the Red Planet. These external alterations change his personality, which is one point of the book, although Pohl also chucks in a twist at the end: it turns out that humanity’s computers have become sentient and are promoting human colonisation of the galaxy to ensure the spread of computers and so preserve what Pohl, wincingly, calls their ‘race’.
Two decades later Pohl collaborated with the symmetrically-named Thomas T. Thomas to write a sequel: Mars Plus (1994). It’s not very good.
The sequel picks up from the computers-have-come-alive twist at the end of Man Plus, or it sort-of does. For it turns out that even after half a century of further developments, humanity hasn’t realised that ‘the cyber’ has become self-aware. Symptoms of sentience in the computer network read to the people living on Mars only as ‘system bugs and errors’. The novel’s 1994 idiom is creakily off-key where computing is concerned:
sometimes the cyber you were working on crashed its system through no traceable fault in the code … some said the grid was infected with the mother of all viruses, one so insidious that nobody had ever seen it, so rabbit-fast at replication that nobody had ever cornered.’ [26]Rabbit-fast! Th-th-that’s A.I., folks. (We’re told that the Martian ‘cybers’ operate in the almost-inconceivable ‘teraflop range’—I mean, my son's PlayStation5 console operates at more than 10 teraflops, but I guess that seemed like a impressive number, computing-wise, in the mid-90s.)
Man Plus’s Torraway, more machine than man now, appears as a minor character in Mars Plus, but most of the sequel’s story is given over to Demeter Coghlan, a blonde, green-eyed, curvaceous Earth-woman sent to Mars to do some spying, or something, who gets caught-up in a local revolution. She undertakes some eyes-of-the-reader, look-at-the-worldbuilding wandering around, and she has a lot of badly-written sex. How badly written, you ask? Let's see.
Frankly it’s almost impressive how solidly unsexy Pohl/Thomas’s strenuous faux-lubriciousness is, throughout ‘… Jory working his hips up and down, pressing the bony arch of his pelvis into her convenient hollowness’ [129]. Convenient hollowness. ‘The woman had long, black hair that went across her shoulders, down her back and tucked under her rump’ [77] Under her rump, you say? What, poking out the front, like a sporran?
What are dresses like in the future, you ask? ‘Demeter wore a tube dress of sheer nylon the color of a raspberry Popsicle. It hung from her nipples to a mere four centimeters below her crotch’ [187] Hung from her nipples. That’s practical couture, right there.
Anyway, we get a Cook’s Tour of future-Mars, which throws up some strange details (‘“Nobody speaks Finnish anymore.” He shrugged loosely. “Russian’s easier to pronounce, and English’s got simpler spelling rules.”’ [79]). The economy is hyper-capitalist, law-enforcement almost non existent and there’s a distinct wild-west vibe, although at the same time folk are too much polite for proper Deadwood-style swearing (‘“Oh, poop!”’ [89]). The book also contains some eye-popping anti-Asian racism: ‘Two sallow Asian faces, one fat, one thin, both with the sorts of eyes that were used to squinting down the sights of a rifle when the game went on two legs instead of four’ [57]; ‘his skin was much yellower, less healthy looking … she glanced around surreptitiously for the servant, Chang Qwok-Do … [he was] probably back in the kitchen arranging to barbeque a dog or something’ [118]). Ouch.
So, overall: no, not good. The plot meanders and drifts. There’s a big denouement when Torraway pops up again and goes mad, or seems to.
But look, never mind all that. One particular detail of the worldbuilding snagged my attention, and it’s this: instead of a space elevator, people enter and leave Mars via a ‘space fountain’. How does that work? Well: ‘on the equator near Tharsis Montes, a linear accelerator stood upright at the bottom of a well dug deep under the Martian surface’:
The accelerator shot a series of ferrite hoops, each a metre in diameter and weighing almost a kilogram apiece, straight up into the sky. Moving at some tens of kilometers per second this fountain of objects created a tremendous kinetic energy. At the upper end of their flight, the hoop-stream entered an electromagnetic torus that functioned like the pulley wheel in a sheave block: bending the stream back on itself to descend at gravitationally increasing speeds towards the planet’s surface. There the stream entered another torus which passed it across to the accelerator again, completing a closed loop of flying rings. The system resembled a chainsaw held together by the forces of inertia and magnetism. [11-12]We’re told that building this mega-device had consumed ‘whole quads of electricity, enough to drive the industrial sector of a fair-sized moon’, but once it was up and running, and the upper-torus was in synchronous orbit, ‘it required only minor additions of maintenance energy to stabilize the stream … to replace the miniscule amounts of kinetic energy that the freight handlers bled off in the form of electricity.’ OK: but how do people ride this alarmingly chainsaw-ish structure, up and down? Grab a hoop, as it’s passing at tens of kms a second, and hope it doesn’t rip your arm out of its shoulder socket? (Obviously not that but—how? Pohl/Thomas don’t say. Am I missing something obvious?)
Thursday, 27 January 2022
Arthur Montagu Brookfield, "Simiocracy" (1884)
Arthur Montagu Brookfield (1853–1940) was educated at Rugby and Jesus, Cambridge, afterwards serving as a lieutenant in the 13th Hussars in India and later commanding a battalion of the Imperial Yeomanry in the Boer War. He was a Conservative MP from 1885 to 1903, and a JP for Sussex. In 1903 he stepped away from Parliament to become British Consul at Montevideo, and (in 1904) Consul to Danzig (then in Prussia, now in Poland). All in all, a successful late Victorian Tory career.
Brookfield had a sideline in writing novels, of which I have read two. The first is The Apparition (1884), a sort of Scooby-Doo-avant-la-lettre story in which a young scapegrace, Paul French, cashiered out of the army for fighting a duel with his commanding officer (he called him a cheat whilst playing, and losing, a game of cards) runs away to an English country house, dies, is buried in the ground and afterward appears as a ghost to various people. It turns out a different person, not French, was interred, that French is still alive, and the titular ‘apparition’ was people seeing him out and about (‘“But I buried him! That’s all I can say,” replied the Rector. “But did you ever see his face; or the face of the dead man, rather?” persisted the Colonel. “No,” answered the Rector after some pause. “And what’s more I must acknowledge that I ought to have insisted on doing so. Oho!” [233-4]’). It's not much cop, this novel.
Then I read Simiocracy: A Fragment of a Future History (1884). This is a more interesting, although still not a very good, piece of fiction. It is, in a sense, science fiction, hence my blogging about it here—although it's a narrow, satirical and frankly racist piece of work.
What happens. Well, at the end of the 19th-century the wicked Liberal Party abolishes the monarchy and establishes ‘a new British Commonwealth’. In an attempt to bolster their electoral support they change the laws so as to enable apes to vote, afterwards importing large numbers of orang utan to tip the electoral balance in their favour. This move is described as ‘in perfect harmony with the progressive spirit of the age’:The people had been gradually induced to perceive that the opinions so stoutly maintained by some of the most thoughtful men of the day as to the original connection between the human and the Simian races, were not to be disposed of by mere contradiction or intolerant ridicule. The people had not yet forgotten the teachings of Darwin ... Had not other alien races been once despised—nay, even slaughtered? And now, were not some of the brightest ornaments of the English Bar these same abhorred “blackamoors”? And did not millions of English as well as Dutch men, women, and children bear allegiance to a dynasty of negroes whom we had once contemptuously handed over into slavery? [Simiocracy, 38]South Africa as a majority-rule republic in this Victorian imagined future is a striking thing. But there is, obviously, no ignoring the racism here. The ‘some of the brightest ornaments of the English Bar are “blackamoors”’ line intrigued me, so I checked. From the Society of Black Lawyers website I learned the following:
In 1854 John Thorpe, a Sierra Leonean, became the first barrister of African descent to be called to the Bar and Monmohon Ghosh in 1864, the first person of Indian descent to be called to the Bar, with John Mensah Sarbah the first Ghanaian called to the Bar in 1887.Interesting! But what strikes me as a wonderful thing clearly struck Brookfield as deplorable. At any rate, Simiocracy elaborates its premise: apes flood into the UK. Their leader is Orang Api:
Many writers have described the gratification as well as the astonishment which they felt, on finding, instead of a savage creature running to and fro on the ground with his hands and feet, a calm, and indeed dignified being, dressed in a loose suit of blue serge, and seated in an arm-chair, from which he welcomed his visitors with an unembarrassed smile and a courteous wave of the hand. When Orong Api stood up, he measured just five feet six inches in height; but his frame was now somewhat bent ... His form displayed great strength, and a certain rugged symmetry. His body was for the most part covered with hair of a dusky brown; but his face and ears, his feet and the palms of his hands, were smooth. [44]There are various other idiotic reforms: children petition to have schools abolished, which happens (‘the obnoxious Education Act was formally repealed, and the arbitrary and feudal calling of the pedagogue banished to the limbo of obsolete privileges’); hunting, shooting and fishing are outlawed and so on. But the main change is the influx of apes.
Surely the friends of Progress may even now feel a thrill of honest pride when they reflect, that but for the wantonness of a few hot-headed young Simians, the conduct of two and a half million successful invaders, flushed with the victory they had already accomplished, and glowing with zeal for struggles still to be undertaken, was such as to elicit the warmest praise from some of the highest officials in the English Parliament. For ourselves, we must here express our deliberate opinion that the general behaviour of the Oran Otani, at the time when they first landed on British soil, was of a kind for which the previous history of European invasions supplies no parallel: and, but for one calamitous incident which we shall now describe, we believe that the entire English people would have eventually acquiesced in this view, by rising like one man to welcome, and not to repel, the pioneers of Simiocratic civilisation and freedom. [130]This thrill of honest pride style of heavyset sarcasm increasingly manifests as the story goes on. The ‘calamitous incident’ is a fire by the London Docks that destroys a building housing thousands of Oran Otani. Suspecting arson, the apes rise up and despoil London:
What wonder that the Simian war-cry arose ... What wonder that a peaceful and indeed benevolent army of occupation became forthwith transformed into a furious and unreasoning army of vengeance ; that bands of wrathful warriors spread abroad in every direction — to the houses and churches, to the wine-vaults, the shops, the warehouses, the wharves, and the shipping — carrying fire and sword with them, leaving slaughter, rapine, and desolation in their wake!An Anglo-Simian conference is organised. The increasing influx of apes into Britain means that there is now a large simian army, although the leader of the apes, Madame Jocki, relies not only on force: ‘her first act was to transfer the huge treasure-chest, which had been brought from Borneo, into the keeping of the English Premier, to be applied to the relief of the homeless poor who had suffered from the recent disasters.’ Either way, Simian domination of England is inevitable:
A few of the wealthier classes endeavoured to rally an armed force, in the neighbourhood of Dunrobin Castle, in Sutherlandshire; but the national spirit had become so effectually tamed, that the attempt had to be abandoned. Most of those who could afford the large sums which were now demanded for a passage to the European continent or elsewhere, made haste to leave the country; and the steamship companies, the owners of private vessels, and the German and French proprietors of the four submarine tunnels, speedily reaped a golden harvest. The British coast was crowded with poorer fugitives; some of whom succeeded in chartering fishing-smacks, and coal-barges, while others put to sea on timber-rafts — and even ruder contrivances — of their own manufacture. [179]Those tunnels are a nice SF-futurist touch. Anyway, the (human) Prime Minister is deposed by Madame Jocki, who is then herself overthrown by an aggressive young ape called Pongat Wou. He issues a proclamation, on the basis of which Britain is now to be ruled (the ‘Tupa’ mentioned is a kind of legendary Orang, supposed to dwell in Borneo, the ultimate ape power):
The necessary circumstance was of course Time, or Progress. Moderns instinctively think of beasts and monsters as being prior. For there to have been an eighteenth-century Primitivist vision of the Noble Savage there must have been a sense that we had advanced – or retreated – from some earlier state. So it is no surprise that the first apes-as-human texts of direct interest to an sf reader are probably two works by a Primitivist philosopher, James Burnett, Lord Monboddo (1714-1799), whose Of the Origin and Progress of Language (1773-1792) and Ancient Metaphysics (1779-1799) contrast humanity's corrupt nature with that of the pacific orang-utan, a vegetarian flautist who may not have learned to speak but who was otherwise capable of human attainments. Monboddo's orang-utan was a potent and poignant figure, and soon entered fiction in Melincourt, or Sir Oran Haut-ton (1817) by Thomas Love Peacock, where Oran Haut-ton saves a young maiden from rape, enters Parliament, and gazes wisely upon the human spectacle. Charles Pougens's slightly later tale, Jocko: anecdote détachée des Lettres inédites sur l'instinct des animaux ["Jocko: Anecdote Extracted from Unpublished Letters on Animal Instinct"] (1824), more directly connects the innocence of the orang-utan Jocko to the doctrine of the Noble Savage espoused by Jean-Jacques Rousseau (1712-1778); this tale, along with other French-language stories of interest, like Émile Dodillon's Hemo (1886) ... But Jocko is not a Satire; and Peacock's instinct to pay less attention to the intrinsic nature of his ape, and to follow his incursion into human society in order to reflect satirically upon civilization, proved more immediately useful. ... The intelligent race of monkeys discovered in Léon Gozlan's Les Emotions de Polydore Marasquin (1857) also serve to hold up the mirror. The use of apes or Yahoos or houyhnhnms as exemplary inhabitants of a Utopia or Dystopia represents a very different – and ultimately more significant – tradition than the use of apes as illustrative examples embedded into our own human world, early examples of which are in any case hard to find: until well past 1850, therefore, an ape-as-human will typically either be discovered in a distant enclave or ideal society, or the ape-as-human will be making a visit to civilization. Only later will the enclave become a Zoo. After the publication of Charles Darwin's Origin of Species (1859), the apes-as-human topos became, of course, far more loaded, a lightning rod for the expression of and discharge of deep anxieties about the nature and destiny of the human race. Indeed, it would not be until Darwin that the apes-as-human topic became sufficiently ambiguous or threatening to warrant widespread imaginative use.In this larger context, Simiocracy seems thin indeed. It can't decide whether it is making a racist point about immigrants, or a local-political point about how stupid and wicked Whigs/Liberals are. Its tonal irony is too clonking, the worldbuilding too scanty. It reminded me a little, as I read, of Will Self's more scatological and wide-ranging but otherwise similarly hamstrung Great Apes (1997). Jerry Fodor's LRB review gets that book right, I think:
There are, in principle, two kinds of chimp jokes: the ones about how chimpanzees are much like us, and the ones about how chimpanzees aren’t much like us. Self’s chimps have a social hierarchy and a ritual of deference according to which one offers one’s respects by presenting one’s posterior. ‘“I am honoured, madam, to make your acquaintance. The entire scientific community is in awe of your ischial pleat ... and I, too, reverence your dangly bits. I would accord it an honour if you would kiss my arse” ... she bestowed the required kiss, then requested an arse lick from Busner in turn.’ Self finds this sort of thing endlessly hilarious; and he is the kind of humorist who thinks that you can’t tell a good joke too often. I guess he tells the kiss-my-arse joke maybe 800 times. Self also can’t get over it that chimps mate publicly and promiscuously, and only when the female is in oesterus. That, he thinks, is more laughs than a barrel of monkeys.Something similar vitiates Brookfield's novel. Though it doesn't have any bottoms in it.
In all other respects, however, Self’s chimps are much like the people that they caricature; in fact, too much like and therein lies the novel’s structural problem. ... The effect is not of animals but of people all dressed up in chimp suits with nowhere much to go. By the end of the book, their fur has more or less ceased to matter to what the characters do and suffer. Maybe that’s Self’s point of course; but just what point does it amount to? Why have your people turn into chimpanzees if you are then going to have your chimpanzees turn into people? Self himself doesn’t seem to know. The novel eventually comes to a halt out of what feels like sheer authorial fatigue.
Thursday, 13 January 2022
Ken MacLeod, ‘Beyond the Hallowed Sky’ (2021)
I enjoyed Ken MacLeod's Beyond the Hallowed Sky: a three-ply space opera/political thriller/first contact yarn. It’s the first Wordle-line in a trilogy, so the ending, though decently-enough landed, doesn’t tie the story into a nice little bow, and that fact perhaps dilutes the enjoyment a trifle. And there are some parts of the novel that don’t work so well: it’s overloaded with worldbuilding and tech-info in the first 50-pages, too much in too short a space I think, which makes the story a little hard to get into. And I suppose the problem with the three-ply approach is that readers are liable to enjoy one of the three elements more than the others, thereby unbalancing the whole. In my case I was less engaged by the “handsome young John Grant gadding about near-future utopian-socialist independent Scotland and stumbling into inventing FTL” story-strand. For one thing it turns out that pretty much everywhere else apart from Scotland already invented FTL fifty years previously, and that they’ve just all been keeping that fact secret, which is a little baffling. But perhaps the trilogy's remaining vols will make it clearer how all that’s supposed to go.
A little more engaging was story-strand 2: a starship (a repurposed nuclear submarine, in fact, as these vessels all are) has been shipping settlers from Earth to the extrasolar planet Apis, where we encounter a weird sentient crystalline lifeform. Apis appears to have been seeded with earthlike life many of millions of years before, such that the actual forms of life the settlers encounter have followed a different, achordate evolutionary path. This is all pretty diverting, although MacLeod has to plump it up with some running-around being-chased excitement to keep the storyline bubbling along. My favourite of the three strands was set on a floating settlement high above the surface of Venus, ‘Cloud City’. This story-strand concerns a blandly polite humanoid robot, Marcus Owen, sent to ‘Red Venus’ as a diplomat and spy (a fact he cheerfully concedes to anyone who asks) who also turns a nice line in boinking people, like Gigolo Joe from Spielberg’s A.I. There’s a mysterious ‘something’ down on the hellish surface of the planet, and Owen descends from the clouds to the Venusian ground in a super-armoured space-suit to investigate.
Although the novel takes a while to build its momentum, momentum is eventually achieved, and the final third is full of nicely-styled moments, cool ideas and narrative hooks. I will read vol 2, and indeed anticipate doing so with pleasure. That’s not exactly the ringing-est of blurbs to slap on the front cover, I appreciate. But there you go.
Hmm. That reference to Wordle, in my first paragraph, is going to date this post pretty catastrophically in the coming months, once the fad passes, isn’t it?
I know Ken, and it would be as unseemly for me to trash his novel as it would be compromised to overpraise it: it’s very good, he’s a master of contemporary SF, you should read it. His prose here, as ever, is clear and informative. You may (I tend to) prefer a more wrought, styled idiom but MacLeod’s approach is to lay the characters, material and ideas of his storytelling directly before the reader, which is a perfectly honourable way of proceeding. There’s a flat-stanley quality to many of the characters, but again, in Owen, MacLeod makes a virtue of necessity on that score, and it's both memorable and likeable the way the novel renders the robot’s convincing fakeness of subjectivity.
But this isn’t a review, so much as a notation of one thought I had, whilst reading. It has to do with story structure. So: you might write a novel and keep it focused on one p.o.v. the whole way through, but the danger there is that your reader will find this approach monotonous and tiresome. So you decide instead to dispose your narrative between two, three or perhaps even more storylines running concurrently. But how to combine them? Beyond the Hallowed Sky opts for: just plait them together, A B C A B C, one chapter at a time. It’s a common strategy, which perhaps speaks to its workability, but I find it (not just here, but wherever I encounter it) irksome, distracting, bitty and, as I say above, an invitation to skip the strands you’re less interested in to get to the ones you’re really enjoying.
‘Alright,’ I hear you say. ‘But what are the alternatives? I’m not sure. I think it’s right to say I’ve never written a novel that adopted the braiding strategy, but that doesn’t mean I shouldn’t. My most recent novel (available from all good bookshops etc) deliberately disposes two quite different p.o.v sections into an overall amphibrach, a three-part shorter-A long-B shorter-A structure, for Dantean reasons. Otherwise I prefer the discrete Rothko-like blocks of text to the intimate braiding. I say ‘prefer’, in the sense that this seems to me a more aesthetically interesting and striking way of doing things, but my taste may well not be yours—and indeed, judging by reactions to my writing, it probably isn’t. So what’s a better way of doing it?
Tuesday, 4 January 2022
The First Generation Starship
Since faster-than-light travel is impossible, and the stars are so very, very far away, any craft making interstellar journeys will take many centuries to get where it is going. Generations will be born aboard these ships, live and die and be in turn superseded by younger generations. This standard trope of SF is predicated upon the unbending realities of physics.
But who was the first to hypothesise a ‘generation starship’? Wikipedia says this:
Rocket pioneer Robert H. Goddard was the first to write about long-duration interstellar journeys in his The Ultimate Migration (1918). In this he described the death of the Sun and the necessity of an ‘interstellar ark’. The crew would travel for centuries in suspended animation and be awakened when they reached another star system. Konstantin Tsiolkovsky, considered a father of astronautic theory, first described the need for multiple generations of passengers in his essay, ‘The Future of Earth and Mankind’ (1928), a space colony equipped with engines that travels thousands of years which he called ‘Noah's Ark’.Clute, Nicholls and Langford go further back:
Tsiolkovsky's ideas ... were anticipated as a passing fancy, though with a more realistic timescale, in John Munro's A Trip to Venus (1897): “... with a vessel large enough to contain the necessaries of life, a select party of ladies and gentlemen might start for the Milky Way, and if all went right, their descendants would arrive there in the course of a few million years.”But 1897 doesn't take us far enough back into the early history of this idea, I think. Here's James E Lake's Bishop Foster's Heresy (1889), imagining a future-fleet voyaging out into the interstellar spaces for ‘millions of years’:
Look out from our flying ship as we sail out upon the universal sea of space. We turn our faces toward the sun, whose bright beams shed such a wonderful sea of material glory over us, that all nature is hid save this effulgence and our own ship ... we begin to look out through the evening twilight upon the vast ocean of trackless ether, upon which we are sailing, and now thousands, yea, millions of ships like our own heave in sight ... Come with me as this fleet of ships sails on its great voyage for a million years, and ask what mighty fleets are these that accompany us over this infinite sea! Hail, thou voyagers over this unsounded sea! Hail Arcturus! Hail Polaris! [154-55]The scale of the cosmos had been understood for a while by this point, and it is a natural extrapolation from that knowledge to speculate how long it would take for a craft to traverse such distances, and what that would imply for the crew. H F Warren's Recreations in Astronomy (1879) included this intriguing Space 1999-avant la lettre conception:
If our earth were suddenly to dissolve its allegiance to the king of day, and attempt a flight to the North Star (the centre of the Circumpolar Constellation), and should maintain its flight of one thousand miles a minute, it would fly away toward Polaris for thousands of thousands of years, till a million years had passed away before it reached that northern dome of the distant sky and gave its new allegiance to another sun. The sun it had left behind it would gradually diminish till it was small as Arcturus, thus small as could be discerned by the naked eye, until at last it would finally fade out in utter darkness long before the new sun was reached. [72]There's a lot of late 19th-c speculation about the distances of such voyages, actually.
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