Sunday, 29 September 2013

Shimon Adaf, Sunburnt Faces (2013)



Well: this is something special.

It's a novel in two parts. The first is concerned with life in a provincial Israeli town during the 80s. Flora is a regular schoolgirl, in a regularly highly-strung family, going to a regular, slightly run-down school. She loses the ability to speak after a bash on the head, and -- the novel opens with this event, in a bravura passage -- receives a direct communication from God out of the television. This unlocks her mutism, and convinces her that she has to change her name to Ori (a boy's name, actually). From there the book rolls downhill into the petty stresses and joys of the quotidian. We get a very vividly rendered account of school-life, the way friendship and enmity swirl fractally through a peer group. The heat and light of the setting is oppressively well written; and the period touches (computers are new; everybody's watching Lace on telly and arguing over whether Cyndi Lauper is better than Madonna) not intrusive. In a powerful early scene a science teacher  has a nervous breakdown during a lesson, barricading the kids in the classroom. As with Jo Walton's Amongst Others, although in, I thought, a rather more realistic (that is to say: a more reined-in) manner, Adaf understands how important the imaginative escape of reading can be to a sensitive child. Ori reads a set of YA fantasy stories by a British writer with the improbable name of Prospero Juno about a young London girl called Ariella. Then, in its second part the novel jumps forward to the early 21st century. Ori is now married, a mother, living in Tel Aviv and writing her own YA fiction. Here, without going into too much spoiler-ish detail, she has a second Divine Vision that throws everything topsy-turvy.

But this novel really deserves to make a splash. The title comes from William Blake, and the whole novel is a powerful and arresting meditation on Blake's central theme. What I mean is: it explores not only 'transport' in a standard genre-Fantasy sense (although it is in part about that); it renders the ways transcendence interpenetrates the mundane -- with what raptures, with what costs. It's a story with international resonance, but it acquires a particular force by being set in Israel. I mean, in a country where the social praxis of religious observance is so pronounced, the calendar punctuated with high-day-holy-day regularity, the social and religious intertwined. This in turn foregrounds another aspect of the divine: God as habit, rather than as epiphany. One of the characters, intensely religious as a teen, looks back from the 21st-century, noting how she drifted away from religion. Had she not married, she says, she might have 'sunk into' it. 'I use that word because that's how I feel,' she says. 'That I would have sunk.'

Sunburnt Faces is one of the most compelling and arresting novels I've read all year. It is enormously to PS's credit that they've picked it up; and you really should visit their website and get yourself a copy. The translation (by Margalit Rodgers and Anthony Berris) is fluent, able to rise to the heights of Adaf's more poetic passages, although just from time-to-time liable a little to drag its prosy feet in some of the more quotidian stuff, and in the dialogue. Still: the only Hebrew I know comes immediately before stuffing my face with food, so I'm certainly not in a position to judge.

If I had to needle, I might wonder if the novel quite needs all its considerable bulk to do what it does -- it's something like 150,000 words long, and there are certainly chapters here that idle along in low gear. And the first half of the novel occasionally struggles with maintaining its high-wrought intensity -- clearly, such high-wroughtness and intensosity is a feature of adolescent life, and Adaf creates a varied and immersive fictional world. The length is part of that, too: building density and texture that enable the moments of epiphany. Amongst the highest praise I can think of for a novel is: this really isn't like anything else; and that is true to a high and brilliant degree of Sunburnt Faces. Strongly recommended.  (Cover art by Chris Roberts; he's on twitter you know. As @deadclownart. Follow him).

Wednesday, 25 September 2013

Stephen Hawking, My Brief History (2013)


The title is a lie. Hawking's briefs are nowhere mentioned in this memoir. I know what you're thinking: aren't those his bloomers he's waving in that photo on the cover? But, no: that's just a handkerchief, during some Boat Club Larks. My desire to know more about Hawking's underpants was in no way satisfied by this book.

Monday, 23 September 2013

Samantha Shannon, The Bone Season (2013)



A novel so heavily hyped, when you open the front cover a little Hype Pixie jumps out and sings the word ‘hype!’ over and over to the tune of Wings’s “Hi! Hi! Hi!” Of course, it’s always a good idea to keep in mind Public Enemy’s wise words on the question of hype. So: this is the first of a Rowling-y seven novels set in an alt-future 2059 England. The country is ruled by a Dark-Materials-esque anti-magic regime called Scion. Our spiky teenage heroine Paige Mahoney lives amongst the criminal underworld at Seven Dials, hiding her clairvoyant powers from Scion’s gestapo. The main burden of the book is: fans are slans. Has anyone ever written a book with that theme before, I wonder? Actually I was never sure why the evil Scion are persecuting the clairvoyants, unless it is out of sheer annoyance at the bewildering multiplicity of kinds of them: Soothsayers (including cottabomancers, cryomancers, catoptromancers, hydromancers, crystalists, axinomancers, bibliomancers, macharomancers, cartomancers, cyathomancers, cleidomancers, astragalomancers, aichomancers, acultomancers, arewehumanorarewemancer? and adamandtheantcers. Not those last two, obviously); Mediums (including trance mediums, restive mediums, speaking mediums, physical mediums, automatistes and psychographers); Sensors (Gustants, Sniffers, Polyglots and Whisperers); Augurs (20 sub-types of these buggers); Guardians (Binders, Simmoners, Necromancer, Exorcists), Furies (Sibyls, Unreadables and Berserkers) and Jumpers (Woolly, Oracles and Dreamwalkers—our heroine is one of these latter). It’s all eye-stingingly intricate and complex, without ever managing to accrue any deeper resonance or weight; and Shannon can find no better way of laying it out for the reader than by infodump followed by infodump, with a side-order of infodump. Stomping foot of nerdism: it stomps. Then Paige is kidnapped by people from a whole other filigree-intricate magical system to be trained up by her captors for complicated, uninvolving reasons. The Bone Season is nearly 500 pages long, but it’s half over before we get past the ‘try to keep all this abstract data in your head, you’ll need it if you’re going to appreciate or even understand the remaining six novels’ worldbuilding stuff. Finally a story gets going, but alas it’s a sub-Twilight love yarn between Paige and a golden-eyed sort-of vampire lad called (perhaps after the Trollope novel) Warden (of course not after the Trollope novel). Warden is one of the Rephaim, immortal-ish, ruthless magical types who feed off humans. Paige and Warden’s courtship develops after the standard model for these things. ‘With a flick of his wrist he brought the blade against my throat. My body hummed with adrenalin. Warden leaned in very close to me. “This blade has been used to draw human blood,” he said, very softly. “Blood like that of your friend Sebastian.” I trembled.’ [141]. Natch, the two of them end up falling for one another.

Tuesday, 17 September 2013

Sibilant Fricative: the Book



You knew it was on its way; there's a reason your heart has been so heavy. Well here's the cover reveal, courtesy of the estimable Ian Whates from whose Newcon Press the volume is forthcoming. Colonel Sanders: eat your heart out. Once its been deep fried and coated in a delicious mix of batter, urbs and spices, of course.

Monday, 16 September 2013

The Black Hole (1979, dir. Gary Nelson)


The strange thing is: I saw this in the cinema in 1979 when it was first released. I was fourteen; not some mewling kidster, and yet I had almost no memory of the film at all. So when it came on the telly I thought I'd have a watch, refresh my memory. My memory has now been refreshed. Or re-staled. One or the other.

So, yes, it's not a good film. 'A Journey That Begins Where Everything Ends' says the poster tagline, an ill-chosen phrase that encourages the viewer to bracket with that 'everything' good script, acting ability, plot logic and the merest gesture towards scientific plausibilty. To appropriate T S Eliot: O dark dark dark. All the aforementioned go into the dark.

Instead of a USS Enterprise or Millennium Falcon, the film opts for the Rusty Old Water Tower model spaceship.



The crew are: lantern-jawed space captain Robert Forster; weirdo science officer Anthony Perkins; the excellently named Joseph Bottoms as Lieutenant Pizer; weirdly skinny Yvette Mimieux as a telepathic space doctor, and Ernest Borgnine, acting as only Ernest Borgnine can. Which is to say: only ever acting Ernest Borgnine, regardless of role. There's also a Dusty-Bin-alike robot, voiced by Roddie MacDowall in a manner that strongly implies 'will that do? can I have my cheque now please?' The robot is called V.I.N.C.E.N.T., and in one nod towards verisimilitude it does indeed seem to lack ears.

As they approach the black hole the gravity makes the whole ship shake and rattle. 'Gravity 6960 still climbing!' says the pilot. 'Gravity's close to maximum!' Will they be torn to pieces? Luckily, no: when they get closer-in gravity falls away 'like in the eye of a hurricane'. Because THAT'S HOW GRAVITY WORKS.

They board a vast survey vessel orbiting the Black Hole, and meet a Captain Nemo-esque figure called Reinhardt Madscientist, whose Eyebrows are Pure Evil.


Maximillian Schell is the actor here, and at no point is his Melodramatic Wickedness in doubt. The only thing stopping him literally chewing the scenery is that this is the future, and he has robots to do the scenery-chewing for him. The robot henchman in this case is a massive floating red Devil Robot also called Maximilian. This robot is evil. Evil ... to the max! And also evil to the Imilian.

Schell says the original crew all perished, and that he just happens to have built an equivalent number of mirror-facemask-wearing android robots, who look like humans in big cloaks, limp about the ship, sleep in the original crew quarters, and eat the vast amounts of food being hydroponically grown on board. But are robots, honestly. Robots. Anthony Perkins at first hero-worships Schell, but then the Perkins Penny drops and he snatches away a mirror mask to reveal -- a lobotomized zombie original crewman! The film has invested (in narrative terms, but also evidently financially) a great deal in the audience finding this mystery absorbing and its solution shocking; but it is neither. More, the script then tosses the whole thing carelessly away: the zombies, says the ship's own Dusty-Bin-type robot, a red model with a Good Ole Boys accent called, I think, R.E.D.N.E.C.K., 'are beyond all help ... death would be a kindness to them now'. So they might as well have been robots. Except to emphasise the evilness of Evil Schell. And the eyebrows have done that already.

Anyway, Schell has been waiting for twenty long years to journey into the black hole; and tonight's the night. As if the arrival of our heroes at precisely this moment isn't massively creaky coincidence enough, we also discover that Dr Macrae is the daughter of one of the original crew, though I forget which. Anyhow: Nemo refuses to modify his schedule, and into the hole he goes, uninvited guests and all.
BOOTH: But that's impossible!'
REINHARDT: The word impossible, Mr Booth, is only found in the dictionary ... OF FOOLS!
'But how will you escape being crushed by the incredible forces?' Booth presses. 'I shall enter the black hole,' Reinhardt decares, magnificently, 'at the optimum angle of rotation!' So off they go, whilst our heroes run around firing lasers at aggressive robots, and giant meteors crash randomly into the ship. It's at this point that the previously jovial, likeable Ernest Borgnine character decides for no reason to betray his friends to certain death, steal their Water Tower spaceship and scarper. He is killed. And whilst we're on the subject -- Borgnine's acting. At all times in this movie Ernest Borgnine keeps the exact same expression on his face. Whether he is joshing with his captain, exploring the Cygnus, interrogating a zombie/robot, eating supper with everybody else at the captain's table or betraying his friends to certain death, his face does not change. No matter what is going on externally, or what conflicts he is struggling with internally, Borgnine looks like this:



The only other thing I have in my notes here (shuffles papers frantically) is that at one point a crew member does some high-gravity calculations at a computer console. The character says, distinctly: 'R squared over d squared times sine squared ...' Which impressed me. But then I'm easily impressed. Schell's character dies when a television falls on him, which perhaps verges on space-bathos. Then he goes to literal hell, and our heroes fly through the black hole to literal heaven, because that's what's waiting for us on the other side, depending on our virtue or otherwise.

Tim Maughan notes, with respect to this film: 'It was made the same year as ALIEN for about 5 times the budget.' He adds, eloquently: 'Ouch.'

Saturday, 14 September 2013

On YA


Thoughts, here, at length and not disposed onto the electronic page in a wholly coherent manner, about YA. These thoughts were not occasioned by this year's Hugo YA category pother, a kerfuffle that left me strangely unmoved, or rather which touched me with the same sad-eyed sense of mildly alienated indifference many ordinary people feel about the Hugos these days. Rather they were occasioned by the Man Booker Prize shortlist.

In fact, the proximate cause of this blogpost is my friend and colleague Robert Eaglestone, who himself blogged positively about the 2013 Man Booker shortlist. Now Bob is a very perceptive and knowledgeable critic, and especially so when it comes to contemporary fiction. He teaches it, reads omniverously and heartily, and writes excellently about it in many forums. He recently published the OUP Very Short Introduction to Contemporary Fiction, which you should buy; it covers a great deal of ground in a short space, and is one of those books where it's hard to see how it could be better done. Another thing about Bob is that he is not in the least a 'high culture' snob; quite the reverse. He really has no prejudices against any genre of writing, or any specific axe to grind. Anyhow, I read his blog and tweeted him: 'Nice Booker blog! Disagree with yr conclusion though: No SF? No YA? No Crime? Insular, backward looking shortlist (and longlist).' He replied robustly: 'as any fule no, sf has its OWN prize (and Crace SF-like). The Kill (crime) was on longlist. YA is YA. It's a good shortlist.' I said:
Historical fiction and womens' writing have their OWN prizes too! So?

YA and (to a lesser extent) SF and crime are where the novel is most exciting today. Booker looks provincial in ignoring that
And he:
Do you really believe that? I'm genuinely not convinced that YA is where it's at (lots of cool YA stuff, I agree).

Nor (sorry) SF either (good though) nor crime, from what I've seen. Literary fiction exciting though, I think: experimental, engaged with world and issues, doing interesting things content and formwise. V pleased by the Booker stuff I read this year
This blog, then, is by way of me trying to get my ducks in a row as to why I think YA is so important in that context.  I'll stress I’m not quarrelling with Bob's assessment of this year's Booker shortlist as good. I can’t engage with his assessment at all, in fact, since I've not read any of the titles on the shortlist (not yet, anyway). I did read the whole of last year’s longlist, and blogged reviews of all the titles, and I really wasn’t very impressed. But maybe this year is much better. I can't speak to that.

And the first thing to say is that I absolutely share the aesthetic predilections Bob hints at in his tweets: I too like books that are stylistically and formally innovative, challenging; I like novelty; I like works that push the envelope and expand my sense of what’s possible in the world. My tastes in this have been shaped by a particular environment—university as student and then as teacher—where the long shadow of Modernism is still umbrageously present. This results in a characteristically ‘Booker’ title: like Will Self’s Umbrella, last year; which I read with respectful admiration at how clever it was but without any larger sense that it was actually saying anything relevant or important. Beyond establishing that Self is a very clever fellow. One of the dangers with books like this is a kind of tacit complacent self-congratulation: to read Ulysses from cover to cover is in part to feel smug about oneself that one has fucking read Ulysses from cover to cover! It’s not Mills and Boon, after all.

But—here’s the thing. Although this is what I personally like, and even what I do—I often write ‘clever’, which is to say ‘clever clever’, and which wins nobody’s soul—I am increasingly of the opinion that this is not the genius of the age. It used to be, for a bit, between about 1904 and 1922, but really: it no longer is. The genius of the age is otherwise.

Now, of course, art can be about anything at all; and I’m not trying to be prescriptive. But this is how I'm looking at it. The three big things, to which art can speak with relevance and importance, are the three things that dominate and shape contemporary culture itself; the things that make our parents and our and our children’s generations different from the preceding 400,000 years of human history. There are lots of things that are relevant to our lives now that were relevant to human existence in 1500 or 20,000 BC, of course; and art can be about those (of course!). But I'm talking specifically about three things that seem to me to set our present existence apart. Things future cultural historians will look back and say 'ah, these were the parameters of the Great Human Revolution of 1950-2020 ....'

One, the least of them I now think, is technology; which is one of the ways SF scores over regular lit—it is, broadly better, at articulating the suddenly accelerated pace of technological change. But as I get older I’m not so sure about this. New technology clearly has transformed life, especially social media and computing tech; but ‘tools’ and ‘machines’ have been around for thousands of years, and feature in world literature going back millennia. So let's put that on one side.

Two is globalisation, diversity. This is a genuinely big deal, I think. Humans have gone from spending their whole lives in one small geographical ambit with a small group of fellow villagers all of the same ethnos and religion (encountering cultural and racial otherness, if at all, only when male and young and in the army) to living in a global village and rubbing shoulders with people of all sorts of different races and creeds and cultures. This, I’d say, is a very good thing (diversity is strength) but the suddenness with which it has happened is something the historians of the Year 20,000 will look back on and peg as the great revolution of the age, bigger by far than the Industrial Revolution. We’re still in the very early stages of learning how to handle it, how to live with one another; and one of the great themes of late 20th and early 21st century fiction is precisely this—postcoloniality most prominently, the whole Brick Lane or Zadie Smith mode of novel-writing. This is good (novels can help us apprehend this change, to get used to it and learn how to live with it) and actually it’s one area where the Booker got it right. In the 80s I mean, Rushdie and post-Rushdie, the Booker did trace the shift away from ‘English’ small scale domestic fiction to postcolonial fiction. Now the shortlists routinely include examples of postcolonial writing (quite rightly: in fact I'm not sure I can think of a list since that 80s that hasn't), and the judges can rarely be faulted on their international spread. Now, speaking for myself I tend to think that art represents this ‘difference’ better via metaphor than via realism. Reading a novel about growing up a young girl in Zimbabwe is fine; but the alien, the monster, the symbolic other speak more eloquently to our actual experience of Being-in-the-world. This though, I can see, comes close to special pleading on my part, because I love sf so much. But, you know: re (let's say) racial diversity in the States—Star Trek had a bigger and more lasting impact there than James Baldwin. Still, I don’t want to get on a hobby horse.

Really what I want to think-aloud-about is childhood. This, you’ve guessed it, is my third big thing. Not childhood as a biological category, which of course has always been with us; but childhood as a new cultural idiom. By this I mean more than that the concept of the ‘teenager’ was invented in the 50s (although I think that’s broadly true). I mean the way that concept has mushroomed into this defining feature of a vast amount of cultural production. It's not just that there is now this new thing, a transition period from being 10-or-so to being ‘grown up’; and it's not just the way that this transition has expanded so much that for many people nowadays it lasts literally decades (I’m in  my 50s and I don’t really feel ‘grown up’). It's that this category now determines almost all contemporary cultural production.

This is our culture. I mean, ‘youth culture’ as a specific marketing category invented to relieve young people of their pocket money in the 1950s—pop music, movies, TV, pulp fiction and comics, games—has become Culture. Pop music is clearly (it seems to me) one of the great art forms of the second half of the 20th-century, and it’s all about youth. Cinema becomes big-hitting only when it channels youth (YA fantasy, kids adventures from ET and Star Wars to Pixar, comic books adaptations, and so on).

This is what interests me about the category of YA. It’s not something I’m especially expert in; I read it a little, but not as much as I might. Nonetheless, it strikes me as evidently one of the modern world's major art forms. I suspect it gets overlooked because ‘we’ have made a fetish of adulthood, maturity, perhaps because so many of us secretly feel that we’re immature individuals souls walking around in grown-up bodies. I blogged about exactly this a while ago, actually. That blogpost isn't me at my most eloquent, now that I come to look at it. But I think it's groping towards something important.

The thing about YA is that there never has been and never will be a YA title shortlisted for the Booker. Even SF and Crime get occasional token nods (usually these are SF and Crime novels that play enough of the complexity, innovation, envelope pushing game). But YA never. Judges look down on it; which is to say, ‘we’ look down on it. And this is exactly the problem.

I think the Booker was ‘right’ about the direction fiction was shifting in the 80s—Rushdie et al, postcolonial and international literatures. But I think they’ve been ‘wrong’ for nearly two decades now.

What were the really big novels of the end-of-90s and the 00s? There have been a great many really good novels of course; and even some significant ones; but the ones that had the biggest social and cultural impact, that spoke to most people, that in a sense define the literary culture (in the way that Dickens and the Brontes, say, ‘define’ the 1840s) are surely: Rowling's Harry Potter; Philip Pullman; Meyer's Twilight books and maybe The Hunger Games trilogy. Of these I’d like to make the case for Pullman as the most significant, because he’s the best writer of the lot—but though I’d like to make the case, I can’t, really. Because Potter and Twilight were just orders of magnitude bigger. It’s not just that vast numbers of children read them. Vast numbers did; but so did vast numbers of adults. These books have had a much larger cultural impact than all the Man Booker shortlisted novels over the same period combined; and they have done so for reasons that speak to crucial concerns of the moment. They are more relevant than elegantly sophisticated novels by Deborah Levy or Jim Crace. They are, in their ways, more eloquent about what matters today.

Take the Twilight books. There are lots of ways in which these are very bad books, of course: clumsily written, derivative etc etc. BUT! They speak to and move millions, and I’m uncomfortable simply mocking that. It (the mockery) seems to me symptomatic of an attitude that defines ‘aesthetic merit’ solely in terms of stylistic or formal innovation. These novels are about something important (sex) and they write about it in an ahem penetrating way—sexual desire as a life-changing force that is at the same time something that doesn’t happen; sex as something simultaneously compelling and alarming, that draws you on and scares you away in equal measure. There are no Booker shortlisted novels that are about that. Indeed the post-Chatterley novel has taken it as more-or-less axiomatic that sex is something to be explicitly and lengthily portrayed in writing. The mainstream fiction attitude to sexual representation is ‘adult’ in the several senses of that word. I have no problem with that myself; I'm not advocating prudery, or Victorian sexual morality. I'm suggesting that that’s not actually how sex manifests in the lives of a great many people.

Or take Harry Potter, bigger even than Meyer. Formally conservative and stylistically flat novels, yes—but this series is one of the great representations of school in western culture. Perhaps the greatest. School dominates your life from 5-18; more if you go to college. When you’re 25 and reading fiction, school has been literally two thirds of your existence. It is our gateway to the adult world, our first experience of socialisation outside the family. It’s a massive thing. When do Booker shortlisted novels ever apprehend it? They don’t—the most you will get is a little background of character A’s schooltimes past, by way of fleshing out their characterisation as adults. Because it is as adults that we’re supposed to be interested in them. School is a massive, global phenomenon. Yet where are the other great novels of school life?

This (to digress for a moment) is one of the things starting to occur to me as I get ready to teach a Childrens' Literature course at my institution over the coming academic year. I'm talking about two broad ways of thinking about ‘the Child’. One is to concentrate on the child—to see him/her as precious, to be nurtured and so on—because they are going to grow into adults, and adults are what we really value. So you don’t abuse children, because that leads to messed-up adults. So, you educate children so that their adulthoods are equipped with the tools to succeed. The other way, though, is to see the child on his/her own terms, to value childishness in itself, not because it’s on the way somewhere else. It seems to me that a great deal of modern society takes the first view; and that, though it’s a rather lesser question, so does most fiction—we’re interested in a character’s childhood only insofar (buried secrets, sexual abuse, whatever) it feeds into the character’s adulthood. What Salinger called all that David Copperfield crap, portraying youth as the road to somewhere else—what's remarkable about Catcher in the Rye is that it’s one of the first novels to treat youth as youth, without looking forward to where youth might go. It's a pretty stuffy novel in lots of ways (I re-read it recently and there's lots that's quite creaky about it) but it does have that. Although the David Copperfield snipe is in another sense unfair: though Dickens’s novel does trace David’s life from childhood into adulthood, one of the things I love about Dickens is his ability to immerse his text in the experience of childhood itself, to see life as a child actually sees it, not as a proto-adult does. And of course people often denigrate him—compared say, to ‘properly adult’ writers like Eliot or Thackeray—as somehow an immature figure, a child who never quite grew up. Bollocks to that. Feature not bug, people! Feature; not bug.

That, though, is not my main point. My main point has to do with broader cultural trends. Booker likes complex, challenging art: either big and complex, or else sometimes (as with the Tóibín) compressed, lapidary, allusive and elusive. It never, ever rewards primitivist art. But ‘primtivist’ art has been the main current of the second half of the 20th-century. Pop is primitivist compared to contemporary classical or jazz, and that’s its whole point—because primitivism can capture energies and aspects of existence the hippopotamus-trying-to-pick-up-a-pea Complex Art simply cannot.

So this, in a nutshell, is my problem with the Booker prize. Imagine a music prize that has, through the 70s and 80s and up to the present, shortlisted only abstruse jazz, contemporary classical and Gentle-Giant-style prog rock concept albums. I love my prog rock, and partly I do so because it ticks all those aesthetic boxes I mention above—it is complex and challenging and intricate music (and I am a preening middle-class pretentious twat). But I wouldn't want to suggest that prog has had anything like the cultural impact or importance that pop, punk or rap have had. That would be silly. So how would you tell the judges picking those shortlists about the Ramones, the Pistols and the Clash? How would you persuade them that they’re missing out not just good music but actually the music that really matters?

Friday, 13 September 2013

Kim Stanley Robinson, Shaman (2013)



Ugg reviewed this title on this very blog a few weeks ago. Now my lengthier and more considered, though markedly less to-the-point, review of this same title is up at the Arc Blog. Go, check it out.
Mind you, verisimilitude is more than just a matter of what flints people used to scrape animal hides with. It has a larger, we could say ideological component to it as well. And, slaver-Northmen aside, everybody in the book is nice. This is a point worth dilating upon, since it’s part of Robinson’s writerly modus operandi, and may have something to do with his Marmite reputation amongst readers. (To be clear: I love KSR with a genuine passion, but I know folk who do not.) Loon, through whom most of this story is filtered, is an immensely likeable individual: resourceful, charismatic, brave and enduring. But then, everybody in his tribe is nice. One of the men admits to forcing sex on his wife whether she’s in the mood or not, and all the other men are immediately and vocally horrified with him. Women are to be respected, not objectified! It’s a commendable sentiment, although I wonder how pre-historically accurate it is. KSR’s position seems to be: the default setting of humankind is basically nice. He believes that, statistical outliers aside, we all basically want to get along, to not hurt other people, to live in balance. His last novel, the marvellous 2312, is like this too: its human characters are various and multitudinous, and some have “attitude”, but all are pretty nice, deep down, and that niceness - the capacity for collective work towards a common goal, the tendency not to oppress or exploit - is common to almost all the characters Robinson has written. His creations almost always lack inner cruelty, or mere unmotivated spitefulness, which may be a good thing. I’m not saying he’s wrong about human nature, either; although it is more my wish than my belief.
Also: raw bear penis. Mentioned not once, but twice!

Monday, 9 September 2013

R S Johnson, The Genesis Project: the Children of CS-13 (2011)

Today's lesson, gentle readers, is bad writing; and the case study is R S Johnson's The Genesis Project: the Children of CS-13 (2011)


Why The Genesis Project: the Children of CS-13? Because The Genesis Project: the Children of CS-13 is not well written. Indeed, rarely does a book quite so ingenuously badly written come my way. Creative writers of English would do well to study it as an object lesson in How Not To Do It.
But Zuberi did not see this, nor did anyone else, and as he slid his pistol back into its holster, the main door to the room flew open and about a dozen men and women, who had been sleeping only moments earlier, poured in, their weapons held and ready to fight if need be, a few more arrived soon after.
Afterthoughts are jotted down in this manner all through, just as the stream-of-writerly-consciousness disposed them. And now there they lie: trapped like hairy Jurassic bugs in the amber of the Writer's Disinclination To Revise. The lesson to be learned from this is: revise. Or
The blue carpet underfoot was embroiled with the CyberTech Defence Systems insignia every five meters or so.
The lesson here is: you keep using that word. I do not think it means what you think it means. Or:
‘The first move has been made,’ he said, not tearing his eye from the body.
That's 'eye', singular. Or:
As the droplets became heavier as they fell upon his body as he walked towards the car, Elliot began to laugh in fits of hysteria.
There's something hypnotic in the repetition of all those 'as' clauses. I rather wish the writer had expanded the number to more than three. Fifteen might have been good. Or a hundred. Then there's:
The island was actually made up of three separate parts. One large, classed as the mainland, and two smaller.
But if ...? No, wait. What?

Below are the examples I noted down whilst reading the book in the public library today. I could have added many more, but time was pressing. After you have read them I invite you to click on the amazon.co.uk link at the top of this post, which will lead you to 13 (count 'em!) hugely positive reader reviews. There's an important lesson in that, too. And the lesson is that many readers couldn't recognise good writing if it walked up and embroiled them on the arse. The numbers in square brackets are page references. Everything is sic.

[21] Robert mouthed the word ‘I’m so sorry,’ before disappearing into the crowd

[23] Whoever was ringing him hadn’t much to say, because he was putting his phone back in his trouser pocket within seconds.

[26] The news helicopter slowly circled, showing the United States Embassy in its awful reality.

[29] Despite everything she had heard and watched, her naivety wanted to believe him; but in that instant it was ripped away from her, for she caught hold of a yellow bar materialising at the bottom of the screen.

[34] But before Mark could reply, there was an awkward clearing of a throat.

[39] Wandering into his bedroom, his thoughts now a swirling creation of worry, regret and empathy, Mark sat on his side of the bed, took off his watch, put it on the bedside table, and ran a hand across his shaved head.

[39] The room was monumental. Brightly lit from above, the entire screen was filled with row upon row of rising blue fabric chairs, all of which were occupied by both men and women, young and old. They were all staring down at something and a moment later a majority showed stern expressions and were shaking their heads.

[46] He tried to remember how many rungs there were, but with his brain bearing this gravest of news and him wondering whether this ladder would still hold his weight, it was impossible to remember.

[47] He knocked several times at the door in a sort of rhythmic fashion, pushed it open and crawled through.

[52] They both looked at him, their eyes beginning to soften.

[54] ‘The first move has been made,’ he said, not tearing his eye from the body.

[53] But Zuberi did not see this, nor did anyone else, and as he slid his pistol back into its holster, the main door to the room flew open and about a dozen men and women, who had been sleeping only moments earlier, poured in, their weapons held and ready to fight if need be, a few more arrived soon after.

[62] The last fifteen months had taken its toll on him … His eyes were drawn and hazy and a dark shroud covered his cheeks, chin and upper lip.

[104] The blue carpet underfoot was embroiled with the CyberTech Defence Systems insignia every five meters or so.

[109] Finally the Genesis Project like a ball of string was beginning to unravel itself!

[163] A single walnut door stood either end of the long, grand hallway.

[177] The island was actually made up of three separate parts. One large, classed as the mainland, and two smaller.

and finally ...

[260]: As the droplets became heavier as they fell upon his body as he walked towards the car, Elliot began to laugh in fits of hysteria.

Tuesday, 3 September 2013

Various


Simon Ings Wolves (2014). This is one of the best books I've read this year; which, since you can’t read it until 2014 is a tease on my part, I know. I know! *shakes head sadly* Conrad works for a company producing ‘Augmented Reality’, layering over our mundane world with googleglassesque advertising or VR-gaming overlay, and which in turn means that Ings sprinkles his text with those most excellent and edifying initials 'AR'. But Connie has a troubled life, traumas half-buried in his past and a tangled sexually messy relationship with his now grown-up schoolfriend Micky and Micky's beguiling wife Hanna. Did his mother commit suicide, or was she murdered? What manner of flood is coming? The publishers are pushing the novel’s resemblance to Ballard, which I can certainly see, although it struck me, tonally, more like Cement Garden-era McEwan mashed-up with Roger Levy’s superb, though criminally neglected Restless Sleep. The creeping sense of society ending whimperingly rather than a banging itself out is particularly powerfully evoked. The main thing to note about Wolves is that is is extremely well (if pitilessly) written. And good though the cybernarrative aspect is, it’s the sense of a pinchingly recognisable real world that sticks the book, unshiftably, in the memory. It is very far from being a bag of laughs, of course—proper British Glumpunk—but a slyly forceful imaginative work for all that. Ings is a writer’s writer; the sort of stylist who makes other writers touch the peaks of their caps in respect at his technical skill. It’d be nice if he became a readers’ writer too, and on a large scale. On the other hand, I know Ings a little (full disclosure etc). Our relations have always been cordial, but I'm not sure he's going to forgive me for 'Glumpunk'.


Stephanie Saulter, Gemsigns (2013). Grown-up, ethical SF this, but somehow its gunpowder sputters rather than sparking to life. ‘Gems’ is a canny contraction for ‘genetically engineered/'genetically modified’, and may catch on as a coinage; but Saulter’s Gems are too much the special snowflakes, each one carrying his or her unicorn-marvelousness in some physical point of difference—glowing hair and so on. Though they have UN-sanctioned protected status, they are still widely persecuted. The novel tells the story of various characters and their interactions as the humanity or otherwise of the Gems is debated. The 5-page opening (to boil it down by selective quotation: ‘when describing a circle one begins anywhere. Each point precedes and succeeds with no greater or less meaning … you must pick the right moment to join the dance … Beginnings are important … Our story begins perhaps with Dr Eli Walker, tasked with the mapping of divisions … But Dr Walker is a reactor to reality, the effect of a cause. We might better begin with Gaela Provis Bel’Natur struggling with corollaries as she makes her way across the city ... So Gaela, maybe Gaela is the starting point. Or maybe not. All beginning are endings, after all … So maybe ...’) epitomised the (GET ON WITH IT!) problems for me. It speaks to me not of textual sophistication but a kind of evasion—of Saulter straining to add nuance to what is, actually, a straight-up straight-down moral universe: oppression is bad, fans are slans, we should celebrate difference not persecute it. I wholly take the moral force of this latter, of course; I just don't see its dramatic effectiveness; or at least don’t see that it has been very effectively dramatised here.


Naomi Foyle, Seoul Survivers (2013). This is a novel with considerably more verve to it than Gems: a snappy near-future thriller about impending world's-end and sinister fertility-plan shenanigans. Positively Scarface-levels of f-word usage and lots of explicitly rendered sexual intercourse, up to and including lovingly described necrophilia (lovingly may not be le mot juste in this context, actually); but Foyle never loses control of her melodramatic plot, and manages to keep the Gibsoniana in check throughout. The characters, whilst not always rising to an actual third dimension, are clearly and effectively drawn. The horrible Johnny Sandman, flash but psychotic ex-pimp and bully, keeps the narrative galloping-on as main antagonist; at least until Korean-American scientist Dr Kim Da Mi’s scheme (‘I’m not an evil scientist!’ she says at one point, which is never a good sign) reveals itself in all its glory. We also get to know nice-but-dim Canadian ex-hooker Sydney; plus North Korean famine refugee Lee Mee Hee and English feckless drug-smuggling Hugh-Grantalike Damien Meadows (the least convincingly-drawn character, I thought) all going through the thriller motions. The South Korean milieu seemed well evoked to me—but I’ve never been to South Korea—and I read the whole thing rapidly and with enjoyment. Mind you, the pun in the title is a pretty crunching one. Anybody who knows me will tell you how much I hate puns.


Robin Hobb, Blood of Dragons (2013). I read the Farseer trilogy at some period in the backward and abysm of time (the 1990s, I think); although I’ve not managed to find time for any of the ninety or so intervening novels before this one. But I picked it up anyway, curious to see what has happened in the realm of the liveshippers. Blood of Dragons tells a 200-page story in 550 pages, as is for some reason de rigueur in the mode of the heroic fantastic (though why this should be de rigueur escapes me)—in this case a story is about a Philoctetes-like wounded dragon, who is feeding on the blood of a human poet to stay alive, whilst anti-dragon sentiment afflicts Hobb’s Fantasy realm. Dragons have made some humans into pets—‘of old,’ says one dragon, ‘we changed some of your deliberately, to better fit you to be companions and servants to our kind. You lived such a short time it was nearly impossible for us to achieve full communion with a human before it died’ [215]. They’re one part Smaug, two parts Twilight-ish vampire, and seven parts Big House Cat. There are some enjoyable moments, but Hobb loves her dragons too much, and knows her readers will too. The more she tries to reinforce the sense of draconic otherness the less eldritch and estranged the dragons become. By the end, the book had leached all the majesty and eeriness from the kind. The dragons say things like ‘hark!’, do not or cannot use contractions like ‘don’t’ and ‘can’t’, and make Northern Brass Band noises (‘in another part of the city, a wild trumpeting of dragons suddenly arose’, 297). They have names like IceFyre—ouch, that ‘y’!—and Tintaglia and Kalo. The humans say things like ‘she is like the fire inside a blue opel! Like glittering blue steel she is!’ [510]; but they also drink coffee and have curtains on their windows and say things like ‘good plan!’ and ‘don’t—just don’t—’ and chat-on after this manner: ‘this probably won’t make sense to you. It doesn’t make sense to me and so I can’t explain it to you. I love Rapskal, just as I love you. But it wasn’t about what I felt for Rapskal that night. I didn’t stop and think “would I rather be doing this with Tats?” It was all about how I felt about me etc etc’ [49] which lacks the authentic Chaucerian twang, I felt. Overall: better than Anne McCaffrey. That’s faint praise, though, isn’t it?


Iain Banks, The Quarry (2013). This of course is, in a grievously literal sense, ultimate Banks. It is readable, as Banks always is; but it isn’t a very good novel overall. Since the interdiction on speaking ill of the dead extends also to their books, I’ll leave this review at that.